The Final Errand

Okay, here goes. A few days ago, I shared a short fic on Purrsia's fanfic archive—the first piece I've ever shared. It's called http://www.thundercatsfans.org/tcfans/fanfiction/viewstory.php?sid=415"" rel="noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">The Final Errand, and it follows Jaga during Thundera's last hours. Logline: "In Thundera's final hours, Jaga learns what must be sacfriced to ensure hope for his people."

If you read it, you might notice allusions to unfamiliar names or events. This piece was originally intended as a prologue to a larger fic, but I feel like it's strong enough to share on its own. I'm hoping that the kick in the pants I need to continue writing is feedback from people who'd enjoy reading more.

I made a small edit to this story today—a purely punctuational edit—that I will now use as an opportunity to solicit feedback again! I you've read it, or care to read it now, please let me know what you think:

http://www.thundercatsfans.org/tcfans/fanfiction/viewstory.php?sid=415

I just read and reviewed your story under my real name, Philip Gipson.