#1 JUN 12, 2014 · 11 yr ago
I love writing fan fics and thought I'd give TC a try. I wrote three scenes. I am not that good of a writer like you guys are so please bare with me. Three scenes isn't a lot but I would like to get your opinions. I should probably write the whole episode first. Please comment on what you think so far. It is in script format.
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Scene 1
Many moons away there is a planet called Plun-Darr. The blue sky has become a dirty orange color. The oceans have become nothing but a sea of flames. Trees and flowers is nothing but a long ago memory.
Slithe, the king of the lizards, looks up in the sky as a shadow of darkness cover him like a big blanket. The sky has been taken over by vultures.
Slithe: (To himself) That is not a good sign.
Slithe's second in command Zaza runs towards him and is yelling as he gets closer. Zaza losses control and if it wasn't for a small rock in the way that knocked him off his feet he would have crashed into Slithe.
Zaza: You won't believe it Slithe...You won't believe it...
Slithe: Talk you fool.
Zaza: The jackals...the jackals...they are leaving.
Slithe: They are?
Slithe looks up again.
Slithe: The vultures are leaving as well.
Zaza: There is nothing left on Plun-Darr. The war against the vultures and jackals have destroyed this planet. We will have to leave as well.
Slithe: I am not abandoning Plun-Darr. With the flying monkeys and the brainless jackals gone...I will rule Plun-Darr.
Zaza: There is nothing left to rule.
Slithe smacks Zaza. Suddenly the earth starts to shake and crack. Flames are escaping from the cracks in the earth.
Slithe: Seem like you do have a brain cell after all. Get the ships ready.
Zaza: Where will we go Slithe?
Slithe looks up at the sky again. Far away is another planet Thundera. Slithe gets an evil grin on his green face.
Slithe: Why are you still here Zaza?
Zaza nods and runs away.
Scene 2
Lion-O looks at a big wall that is outside of Cat’s Castle. Lion-O gets a flashback of when he was just a young cub.
Voice Over (Jaga): A hundred Thunderian years ago there was a King. He was the lord of the Thundercats but power darkened his heart. He enslaved his own people.
The scene cuts to a young Lion-O looking at the wall inquisitively.
Lion-O: What happened to him Jaga?
Jaga: That is a story for when you are much older my dear Lion-O.
Lion-O: Jaga I am not a cub anymore. I am old enough.
Jaga starts to laugh.
Jaga: Sure you are.
Lion-O’s flashback ends. He looks down at Snarf who is licking his paw.
Lion-O: You know Snarf. Jaga never told me the rest of the story.
Snarf: Snarf Snarf.
Jaga comes out of the castle. He sees Lion-O standing in front of the wall. He walks up to him.
Jaga: Prince Lion-O.
Lion-O: You never told me the rest of the story Jaga.
Jaga: Didn’t I.
Lion-O: No you said I was too young. I am not anymore.
Jaga: No you are not. You want to hear the rest of the story.
Lion-O: Yes Jaga. I want to know what happened to this cruel King.
Jaga: Then I shall tell you my young Prince.
Jaga turns around and walks to the fountain and sits on the edge. Lion-O follows and sits in front of Jaga.
Scene 3
Wilykat and Wilykit are standing behind a tree. They are looking at Cat’s Castle.
Wilykit: It is much bigger than I thought it would be Kat.
Wilykat: It is.
Wilykit: How are we going to get in? It must be guarded.
Wilykat: If there is a way we will find it Kit.
Wilykit: It must be beautiful inside. Everything must be made of gold.
Wilykat: Floors of gold…
Wilykit: Windows of gold…
Wilykat: Beds of gold…
Wilykit: And lots of food.
Kit sees the food floatiing around her head. he floating food disspareas when Kat's stomach makes a growling sound.
Kat and Kit runs towards the castle.
Kit: Suddenly I don't think it is such a good idea. If they catch us we would go to the dungeons. I am too young to go to the dungeons.
Kat: We just have to be smart. Besides we need to see him. He will be the only one that could help us.
Kit: What if he can't?
Kat: I saw him before Kit.
Kat's sees an image of Tygra in his mind.
Kat: We came a long way. We can't leave until we see him.
Kit gives a sigh.
Kit: Time to think of a plan to get in.
Kat: I think I may have one. Come on Kit.
[FONT=Verdana]Kat and Kit runs towards the castle's gate.[/FONT]
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Scene 1
Many moons away there is a planet called Plun-Darr. The blue sky has become a dirty orange color. The oceans have become nothing but a sea of flames. Trees and flowers is nothing but a long ago memory.
Slithe, the king of the lizards, looks up in the sky as a shadow of darkness cover him like a big blanket. The sky has been taken over by vultures.
Slithe: (To himself) That is not a good sign.
Slithe's second in command Zaza runs towards him and is yelling as he gets closer. Zaza losses control and if it wasn't for a small rock in the way that knocked him off his feet he would have crashed into Slithe.
Zaza: You won't believe it Slithe...You won't believe it...
Slithe: Talk you fool.
Zaza: The jackals...the jackals...they are leaving.
Slithe: They are?
Slithe looks up again.
Slithe: The vultures are leaving as well.
Zaza: There is nothing left on Plun-Darr. The war against the vultures and jackals have destroyed this planet. We will have to leave as well.
Slithe: I am not abandoning Plun-Darr. With the flying monkeys and the brainless jackals gone...I will rule Plun-Darr.
Zaza: There is nothing left to rule.
Slithe smacks Zaza. Suddenly the earth starts to shake and crack. Flames are escaping from the cracks in the earth.
Slithe: Seem like you do have a brain cell after all. Get the ships ready.
Zaza: Where will we go Slithe?
Slithe looks up at the sky again. Far away is another planet Thundera. Slithe gets an evil grin on his green face.
Slithe: Why are you still here Zaza?
Zaza nods and runs away.
Scene 2
Lion-O looks at a big wall that is outside of Cat’s Castle. Lion-O gets a flashback of when he was just a young cub.
Voice Over (Jaga): A hundred Thunderian years ago there was a King. He was the lord of the Thundercats but power darkened his heart. He enslaved his own people.
The scene cuts to a young Lion-O looking at the wall inquisitively.
Lion-O: What happened to him Jaga?
Jaga: That is a story for when you are much older my dear Lion-O.
Lion-O: Jaga I am not a cub anymore. I am old enough.
Jaga starts to laugh.
Jaga: Sure you are.
Lion-O’s flashback ends. He looks down at Snarf who is licking his paw.
Lion-O: You know Snarf. Jaga never told me the rest of the story.
Snarf: Snarf Snarf.
Jaga comes out of the castle. He sees Lion-O standing in front of the wall. He walks up to him.
Jaga: Prince Lion-O.
Lion-O: You never told me the rest of the story Jaga.
Jaga: Didn’t I.
Lion-O: No you said I was too young. I am not anymore.
Jaga: No you are not. You want to hear the rest of the story.
Lion-O: Yes Jaga. I want to know what happened to this cruel King.
Jaga: Then I shall tell you my young Prince.
Jaga turns around and walks to the fountain and sits on the edge. Lion-O follows and sits in front of Jaga.
Scene 3
Wilykat and Wilykit are standing behind a tree. They are looking at Cat’s Castle.
Wilykit: It is much bigger than I thought it would be Kat.
Wilykat: It is.
Wilykit: How are we going to get in? It must be guarded.
Wilykat: If there is a way we will find it Kit.
Wilykit: It must be beautiful inside. Everything must be made of gold.
Wilykat: Floors of gold…
Wilykit: Windows of gold…
Wilykat: Beds of gold…
Wilykit: And lots of food.
Kit sees the food floatiing around her head. he floating food disspareas when Kat's stomach makes a growling sound.
Kat and Kit runs towards the castle.
Kit: Suddenly I don't think it is such a good idea. If they catch us we would go to the dungeons. I am too young to go to the dungeons.
Kat: We just have to be smart. Besides we need to see him. He will be the only one that could help us.
Kit: What if he can't?
Kat: I saw him before Kit.
Kat's sees an image of Tygra in his mind.
Kat: We came a long way. We can't leave until we see him.
Kit gives a sigh.
Kit: Time to think of a plan to get in.
Kat: I think I may have one. Come on Kit.
[FONT=Verdana]Kat and Kit runs towards the castle's gate.[/FONT]
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