How bad did I do

I decided a few years ago to do a rewrite of Dogs of War
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10890415/1/Dogs-Of-War
and was wondering how bad I did, or how my original characters are. etc
I'm still working on it it just that real life got in the way.

"muireann, post: 128518, member: 27554" said:

I decided a few years ago to do a rewrite of Dogs of War
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10890415/1/Dogs-Of-War
and was wondering how bad I did, or how my original characters are. etc
I'm still working on it it just that real life got in the way.

I've been having a ball reading your version of "Dogs of War." I think you're doing a very good job with it.